Sunday, November 27, 2011

jewelcase

and the void screamed through me,
the last bit of me was lost in the world.
and this oblivion was engraved within,
reminding me I have no belonging left.

5 comments:

Antony said...

You then what ?


You write powerful poetry.

nothingprofound said...

To be empty like that. Do you experience it as pain or pleasure, loss or liberation?

Rahul Bhatli said...

@antony
and then i shut myself from the word and breathe.

thank you for your kind words.


@nothingprofound
honestly? it is pain..with an uncanny feel of liberation. But I am no master with words. I am still at loss, when it comes to emotions being expressed.

magiceye said...

beautifully done!

Rahul Bhatli said...

Thankyou magiceye

a sane angle